Wednesday, November 11, 2020

My...Why Poem

22 comments:

  1. Kia Ora room 8 my name is Shyla I’m from pt England school and you have talent. I love everything about your movie. I love your handwriting and I love your drawings too. How did you write all those
    words with play dough? From Shyla in room 21 at pt England school.

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  2. Kia Ora room 8 my name is Shyla I’m from pt England school and you have talent. I love everything about your movie. I love your handwriting and I love your drawings too. How did you write all those
    words with play dough? From Shyla in room 21 at pt England school.

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  3. Kia Ora room 8 my name is Shyla I’m from pt England school.I love everything about your movie. I love your handwriting and I love your drawings too. How did you write all those
    words with play dough? From Shyla in room 21 at pt England school.

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  4. Kia Ora room 8 my name is Shyla I’m from pt England school.I love everything about your movie. I love your handwriting and I love your drawings too. How did you write all those words with play dough? From Shyla in room 21 at pt England school.

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  5. Good morning Room 8. We really loved watching your movie about lockdown. We think the playdough images were really fantastic. We loved how you explained clearly how you were feeling in your poems. We enjoy Summer's pictures and Chadwick's skills with the basketball. We thought the music was excellent.

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  6. Talafa lua room 8 I liked how you guy did your film and i how you guys miss school sad friends.I can say that we could meet each other again.

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  7. I really like this movie because you are explaining how you feel about lock down

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  8. Kia Ora Room 8. This is Tyrah from Room 7 Saint Patricks school. I love your video! It's so creative. Keep it up!

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  9. Kia Ora Room 8!
    My name is Simon and I attend Point England School as a year 7. Wow, your movie is so inspirational. I really enjoyed your poems about yourself. I personally think your guys poems are spectacular. Can I ask how long it took you guys to construct your poems? Geez, I think it took several hours considering how glorious they were. It's like watching god go down from heaven!
    Next time I think you should have some sort of narrator so people can understand the video, e.g - someone saying a conclusion at the end.
    But overall I really enjoyed your movie, make sure to check out movies from Point England!

    Kind Regard
    Simon

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  10. Hello Room 8!
    My name is Valessa a year 7 at Point England School , I Enjoyed the film you guys made , At first I was confused but the more I got in the more I understood . You all used wonderful vocabulary and explained perfectly! I also have been doing poems this year , around the first couple of weeks at the start of the year . This Film is very interesting , Great movie Room 8! Keep up the great work , I look forward to seeing more from you .

    Was it hard to come up with poems to explain yourself ?
    - Valessa

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  11. Kia Ora Room 8!
    My name is Simon and I attend Point England School as a year 7. Wow, your movie is so inspirational. I really enjoyed your poems about yourself. I personally think your guys poems are spectacular. Can I ask how long it took you guys to construct your poems? Geez, I think it took several hours considering how glorious they were. It's like watching god go down from heaven!
    Next time I think you should have some sort of narrator so people can understand the video, e.g - someone saying a conclusion at the end.
    But overall I really enjoyed your movie, make sure to check out movies from Point England!

    Kind Regard
    Simon

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  12. Hi St Patricks, my name is Taniela, and I attend St Pius X School, I really love when you did the plato words, and when those girls how like noddle arms

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  13. FABULOUS! I love how you rhymed the words and when you were being honest with what you tell us.

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  14. Hi Room 8 my name is Ana.I come from St pius x . I really like this movie because it is deparsing themselves and cares about others in their school and family.

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  15. Hi, I love your poem you made. It makes me want to do one too.

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  16. very good video and movie love the good work room 8 keep it up!!!!!!!!!! brothers

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  17. The video is very Interesting, I like alot Room 8. Keep it up!

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  18. Kia Ora Room 8, This a wonderful video I like the edit, the acts and the music. Keep up the good work room 8!

    -Amiel Room 7

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  19. Hi, I love your poem you made. It makes me want to do one too.

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  20. Hi Room 8 my name is Ana.I come from St pius x . I really like this movie because it is deparsing themselves and cares about others in their school and family.

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  21. Hello, I love you poems, They rhyme, they make sense, the poems are really good, my one is my accurate writing whatever im biting. Keep it up guys.

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  22. Kia ora Room 8. My name is Phil and I am a facilitator for the Ako Hiko cluster in Auckland. I loved your movie. I like the way you used music in the background and the play dough writing was a nice idea. What were some of the positive emotions you felt during lockdown?

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